In some areas of the US, a “ curfew” is imposed, in which teenagers are allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this ?
Curfew is a preventive measure users by the state to maintain law and order. Teenagers are barried from going outside of their homes alone late at night in some regions of the United States. In my opinion, it is a right action by the government as it provides safety and security to teenagers and makes their future free of crime
Curfew can protect teenagers from indulging in crime. In the United States, my places are a hotspot of criminal activities, where criminals, drug peddlers and habitual offenders become more active at night. They usually lure the youngers for helping them in committing a crime, who agree easily to do anything for money. Criminals can transport drugs, kill someone, and extort money from others with the assistance of naïve young people. Even if teenagers do not take part in any unawful, coming in contact with criminals can implicate them in lawsuits. However, accompanying parents or siblings can stop youngers from dealing with criminals. Thus, this measure prevents teenagers from becoming criminals.
Curfews also save young people from becoming a victim of crime. Robbery, chain snatching, extorting, murders and rape are common at night. Teenagers are not smart enough to escape from such situations. So they can be a soft target for criminals. But being with elders, teenagers are safe as criminals cannot harm them in the presence of adults. Adults can defend youngsters in case of any attack. The United States Department of Homeland Security, for instance, published a result report on the implications of late-night curfews in Florida. The report asserted a sixty-five per cent reduction in unlawful activites against teenagers. Therefore, curfews can potentially save teenagers from the danger of crime.
In conclusion, measures such as restricting the movement of teenagers in late-night resorts by the state to provide safety and security to them. Late- night curfews for teenagers not only save them from becoming the victim of crime but also stop them from becoming criminals. Thereby, curfews in the United States are for the protection and safety of the young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22448979592 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6799267708 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3613233267 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147161437208 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500260899928 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274508908499 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103756112603 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244256358224 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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