Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modernization, human activities is adversely effecting the beauty of the nature on plants and animals surrounded to them. different people have various opinion which will not be possible to change, while other opine that, actions can be taken to make a change and save the asthetic of the nature. In my opinion, there are some positive and negative effects with the man's activity. Let me elaborate both the aspects.
To embark with, since we are into 21st century and has done lot of developments in the technologies in various sector agriculture, industrial, Information technology and so on. there is huge growth in the economic sector compare to the previous era. man has made the life quite easier while using its intelligence in different domain instances homemade appliances, washingmachine, TV, Radio, likewise.
On the otherhand, it is precisely effecting the beauty of the nature. there are some chemical industries that is quire harmful for the nature, which is leading to greenhouse effect and inturn changing the natural cycling of the nature. Apparently, in the medical sector, scientist do use their testings on the animal, which is also one of the reason of man's activity.
To conclude this, it is the responsibility of the human being to create the balance and retain the beauty of the nature. Must band the chemical industried which is effecting the beauty of the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, likewise, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19130434783 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84769000671 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0187460954 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180862423579 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599164538865 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827954485775 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110574394973 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13489084158 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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