If we want to save the future of the planet, we
will have to drastically change our way of life.
What is your opinion?
Preserving the life on the planet is one of the top priority concerns that all individuals should widely participate in doing it by amending their behavior sharply toward the environment. In fact, I wholeheartedly concur that revising our current attitude against the planet resources will largely contribute to enhancing the quality of life on the earth. This essay aims to list some points which are supporting my point of view in further detail.
To start with, there is no doubt that a plethora of correct actions might make a conspicuous impact on the future of the planet. First of all, changing our consumption pattern is a key role in maintaining wildlife diversity and avoiding deforestation. To illustrate, it’s irrefutable that there is a remarkable dependency on animals’ meat as a main food source for most of the people. Therefore, lots of green landscapes and natural lakes and rivers being used by animals’ farmers to feed animals. As a result, many forests might be effected. Thus, in order to save this great biodiversity, individuals should minimize the meat dominant diet and replace it with a plant based diet.
Secondly, dirty power which comes from burning oil fossil is the main reason of pollution and will hugely affect the quality of life on the earth afterwards. Therefore, individuals should utilize any other more eco-friendly options for their daily commute or even for traveling abroad. However, governments also should encourage people to do so by investing more in the clean environment power sources such as solar, wind and many others. Take Masdar City in Abo Dhabi, as an example for a clean and healthy environment. Indeed, it’s the only friendly city across the world where the inhabitants use clear power. Since, it utilizes the sunlight to generate the needed power for the entire city. Furthermore, Masdar City uses friendly environmental transportation such as electric cars, buses, and train as the only transportation method. Thus, if all governments copied this great example, the upcoming generations on the planet would have a better quality of life.
To sum up, saving our planet is the most significant matter which needs a massive collaboration between people by changing their behavior toward the natural resources and governments by investing more in clean and natural resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28116710875 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94217430107 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594164456233 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.940617927 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.611111111 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122368509685 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033821507827 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429943577581 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805756350573 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260835866024 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.