The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phone can also be cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Human lifestyle has changed drastically with exponential growth in usage of mobile phones in recent times. This essay will explain that even when mobile phones has many disadvantages but it is a necessity and a part of human life with numerous benefits. Firstly, this essay will explain about the advantages of mobile phones in our routine life. Secondly, it will elaborate the detrimental impacts and the reason of advantages outweighing disadvantages.
To begin with, it won't be incorrect if it is said that mobile phones are as critical as a heartbeat. There are infinite applications of mobile phones which has made our life easier and comfortable. For instance, communication has been made easier from any part of world, it is the same device which also keeps us updated with news, social media and health tips. In modern times, usage of mobile phones made it easy to deal with banking, stock market and food deliveries.
On the first hand, we have a huge list of applications helping us and on the other hand, it also have negative impacts related to social life and health. Nowadays, people are so indulge in mobile phones that they forget the fact that there is a social life apart from social media. Laziness is another present gifted by mobile phones to current generation. Mobile phones has given rise to many medical problems like obesity and psychological disorders. As per a research, addiction of mobile phones has affected us with eye problems, insomnia and muscle problems.
Even the atom bomb was invented for a purpose to serve human better, but human has used it otherwise. Similarly, mobile phones usage limit has to be set by people themselves otherwise it will have negative implications. I believe the comfort and security it offers are much more than the ill effects it has.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...lping us and on the other hand, it also have negative impacts related to social life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, apart from, as to, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9702970297 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66720985874 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8241441347 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258159115088 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938055053227 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452538752358 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154454294178 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530116264858 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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