You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take.
Dear John,
I am Satrajit, tenant at your M.G.road's house. I am writing this letter in concern with the furniture available at rented house. As you are aware I have shifted to this location two weeks ago along with my family so it is getting difficult for me to tackle this kind of issues.
To elaborate more about the problem, firstly, the sofa in the drawing room is missing one leg which makes it imbalanced when someone sits on it. Secondly, the wardrobe in the master bed room has termites, due to which all wooden stuff kept over there are destroyed.
I hope you understand how critical these problems are. It would be highly appreciated if you could replace the sofa to resolve my first issue and call pest control company for resolution of second problem.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Satrajit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...second problem. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Satrajit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75510204082 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43649501056 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.755102040816 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1074422051 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160015438458 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065198605052 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045561320316 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757647027875 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591433705994 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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