Some people say that parent should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's world, many parents are concerned about upbringing and development of their children. They want to provide best guidance and lifestyle to their children in order to get success in every possible situation, but the question arise here is how the parents should guide? How a child will emerge his/her talent?
To answer, some parents send their children to group activities such as sports, dancing, painting classes or karate classes. Group activities help children in learning cooperation and coordination. It also allows child to be socially active by making new friends, this will in turn help child's physical as well as mental development. Children can also understand their area of interest very well by performing group of tasks and this will help them to build successful career ahead.
While on the other hand, some parents believe that they should allow their children to spend time on their own. Knowledge can be gathered from internet or televisions. This is correct to some extent but this habit makes children introvert and child's physical development stops, also often it leads to unwanted knowledge. For instance, a child came across various type of drugs and learnt how to avail it which made him a drug addict in no time.
To sum up, as human is a social animal so spending time with group of people will always help individual to grow. In my opinion, parents should encourage their children to make new friends or go to various development classes. This will help their children to build stronger bonds and brighter future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...lopment of their children. They want to provide best guidance and lifestyle to their childre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0503875969 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53731540668 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9280333564 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333943017179 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126556362624 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952622931018 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214537395331 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00851592491219 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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