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With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely.
How important do you think letter writing is? Do you thin letter writing will completely disappear?

Nowadays, with rapid growth of technology and also presentation of
social networks people do communicate with each other easily in the least
amount of time. They can discuss with each other on subjects online and can get
their answer at the moment. This essay will shed some light on this argument
and try to analysis it before arriving at conclusion.<o:p></o:p>

The first positive point that is important in writing letter is the
feeling of letter writing on paper with ink has an unforgettable feeling for both,
writer and reader. Sometime readers read the letter on their mind with writer
voice, so that it has direct effect on reader’s mind. Hand writing letter and
sending them through post offices even can touch readers heart in some
emotional relationship. Moreover, in writing letter people try to use correct
grammar more than when they write any messages on computer or on their smart
phones. Letters are more formal than other writings, thus the grammar of every
language in the world will be protecting and use in right places. For instance,
we use contraction sentence in their emails or messages but in hand writing
letter we never use it.<o:p></o:p>

It is obvious that words have deep effect on everybody and wrong
texts in our chat may never to be forgotten. Writing letter get this opportunity
to check their writing before we want to send, but online conversation is
different. Furthermore, the next benefit of writing latter goes back to people’s
handwriting. Computer writing have enormous fonts, and users just want to select
one beautiful font for their text, but nice-looking hand writing in letters are
necessary and people try to write their writing more attractive and legible.<o:p></o:p>

At the conclusion, in my opinion, because of advanced technology
and use of communication equipment such as mobile phone, tablet or laptop and
also video calls every time everywhere, people do not want to use traditional
ways for their relationships, and step by step writing letters is getting
forgotten. Unfortunately, we are evidence that the number of post box in houses
are decreasing and it shows that nobody is not wait for receiving letter from
others.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-h...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-h...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-h...
^^^^^^
Line 33, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-h...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2864.0 1615.20841683 177% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 7.40051679587 5.12529762239 144% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.2158190546 2.80592935109 364% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.851238947 49.4020404114 449% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.666666667 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 37.0 4.38176352705 844% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177776377791 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107086178784 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630876952068 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736339685724 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712355719285 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.3 50.2224549098 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.7 11.3001002004 192% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 26.23 12.4159519038 211% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 9.78957915832 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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