An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?
It is becoming a popular trend nowadays for skilled people like doctors, teachers and engineers to move to rich countries. This move can be tackled by providing a better quality of life and wages to professionals. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate the banes and suggest the possible solution to counter this situation.
Firstly, the most common problems poor nations face is the limited resources in sectors like medicine, engineering and education as most of the skilled resources from poor countries prefer to work overseas. When the professional leave for overseas the native country has to face brain drain which effects its development and economy at a global scale. The resources who could contribute to its development are working in foreign markets. In recent past countries like India have failed to make its mark in the global market specifically in the research and development sector as most of its skilled professional is working in first world countries.
Secondly, the possible solutions to solve such a problem would have to come from governments of third world countries which need to take concrete steps and entice their people with better wages, quality of life and a safe environment. Additionally, the governments must improve the state of art infrastructure in developing countries to provide better learning opportunities which would entice many professionals to stay in their native country. In developing countries like Malaysia, the government entices its manpower by providing them incentives and facilities so that they can contribute to the growth and development of the country.
To sum up, the only way forward is for the governments of third world countries to provide better living conditions and wages to their professionals so that they can contribute to the development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32302405498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99713888358 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7153591556 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.818181818 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187111505328 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753012648395 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225159787187 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110129544334 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180245095524 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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