The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Modern technology has given many things to humanity and the internet is one of them. There is a plethora of information present of world-wide-web that we have access to and is increasing day by day. From small articles to books, from news headlines to stories, from songs to movies and game the world of the internet is huge.
The Internet has opened many aspects of communication. The information on various topics: from politics to weather forecast, from biographies to scientific discoveries, from how to dye your hair to how to make a battery, from the meaning of different words of a language to its pronunciation, from jokes to funny videos the internet has become the epitome of information. Many universities have started online learning programs which may prove beneficial for those who live in remote locations and also for college dropouts who want to resume their education. Information on universities is just a few clicks away.
On the other hand, the information available on the internet may not always be right and even misleading. The youngster may fall prey to such misleading information because the media may promote nudity is great, smoking is cool etc. Regional riots, such as riots occur in a state of India Uttar Pradesh in 2013 are also known to occur due to fake news spread through the internet. Information provided on the internet is dangerous, such as, how to make a bomb, how to hack a website or social media account promotes criminal activity.
To conclude, the internet has made possible far-fetched information easily accessible. It has definitely changed our lives. But as every coin has two sides so has this access to information. Not all the information available on the internet is authentic and can as well be misleading and cause chaos.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98993288591 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90832752495 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4478408645 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162892361917 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494788613152 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363653200758 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976562805144 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348876640587 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.