The Internet has as many disadvantages as it has advantage. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowaday, Internet is an important part of our life that can’t be replaced. Some people believe that it brings to us lots of benefits whereas many others protest that its harmful effect should not be disregarded. It is easily to understand that people who live in different situations will have different opinions.
People who are keen on Internet suppose that it is an information system that connect people all over the world though computer. We can read e-news, watch movies, search for information, keep contact by Gmail, Yahoo or Facebook. Now, we don’t need to go shopping and barge in sale off time, instead of, we only need to have a computer or smartphone connecting to Internet and with only a click we can buy a lot of discount clothes without waiting for the sale off time. There are a lot of online shop that you can check such as Lazada, Amazon, Cho Tot….Moreover, students now don’t need to take extra class everyday after school because there has a lot webbsite that teching on the Internet like Moon, Khan Academy, Hocmai,…Gradually, Internet becomes a place that occur emulations between websites. They must improve and upgrade everyday to atrract more users and then they will be more qualitative.
In the other hand, (một số người còn lại) think that of course Facebook is a place that we can connect with each others to exchange information, but surfing Facebook too much will lose our times and sometimes make a lot of dangerous consequence. For example, people who always use Facebook when walking will not concentrate on the road and then they will make accident. Second, in recent time, newspaper has reported that some bank account are hacked and scrounged a lot of money. And the reason is that when people buy things on the Internet, they carelessly leave their bank id on some untrustable website, then hackers will have their id easily. Third, emulation between website sometime annoy us. The website need to post advertisement in a lot of different websites to get people attention. This will take a lot of times of us when we click on it.
In conclusion, Internet bring to us as many advantage as disadvantage. So if we are careful and skilled in using Internet, we will prevent some disadvantage that we don’t expect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... check such as Lazada, Amazon, Cho Tot….Moreover, students now don't need to take e...
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Line 2, column 618, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...now don't need to take extra class everyday after school because there has a lot we...
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Line 2, column 733, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...Internet like Moon, Khan Academy, Hocmai,…Gradually, Internet becomes a place that...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Gradually
...ternet like Moon, Khan Academy, Hocmai,…Gradually, Internet becomes a place that occur em...
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Line 2, column 841, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...websites. They must improve and upgrade everyday to atrract more users and then they wil...
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Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'brings'.
Suggestion: brings
... click on it. In conclusion, Internet bring to us as many advantage as disadvantage...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
... In conclusion, Internet bring to us as many advantage as disadvantage. So if we are careful a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, so, then, third, whereas, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90956072351 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78526123744 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9733055146 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.764705882 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915080677899 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311517376792 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033543699074 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674404883628 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329638794226 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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