It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give examples and reasons.
These days people have different opinions in relation to the upbringing of their offsprings. Some of them believe that rural areas are perfect for the proper development of their children, which is far from the shores of the city. I believe that nowadays, urban cities are more beneficial for the better growth of a child, and I disagree with the given notion.
First and the foremost reason for my belief is due to the education system that the metro cities provide. To be clear, the city‘s are not only providing better educational facilities but also creating an open environment for the growth of the children. However, the pupils of the village are far behind from the environment that is generally required for studying. To illustrate, research done by the Indian Express newspaper has shown that students of metropolitan cities are more intelligent than those of villages because they have more resources and facilities if compared to countryside children.
Moving ahead the children who are brought up in cities are more confident and outspoken, which is considered as an advantage in their future career growth. This is because in cities there are plenty of opportunities in which one can take part and polish himself. For example, by taking part in social activities, quiz competitions and other events, children could boost their confidence level. On the other hand, countryside areas are unable to provide such required skills, and as a result, children who grew up there will face multiple problems, when they enter a professional career.
In conclusion, the lifestyle of rural areas is far behind the fast-paced cities, so I disagree that children could be provided with a good childhood in the countryside. According to the needs of the current comp petition world, in terms of education and confidence-building skills, one should be brought up in cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16993464052 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86642852535 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9348554029 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232605434419 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787059833209 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445508401805 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131148874541 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477723434285 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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