It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education
and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?
It is argued by many that sports and physical education would be beneficial for students if made compulsary. In my opinion, it is a tremendous idea to encourage children for regular exercise as it brings many positive outcomes for them.
To begin, in today's competitive environment, children are dedicating majority of their time to study. Eventually, they are not much involved in outdoor activities and such lifestyle has adverse effect on their health. Moreover, during leisure time, children are rather occupied either with gadgets or watching television, which is making situation more deplorable. Therefore, if they would get to learn sports or exercise in school then it would bring many health benefits and make them healthier and physically fit.
Apart from health benefits, another advantage of having extra-curricular activities is good social behavior. For example, indulgence towards sports would mould student's persona to mingle with students of different background and make new friends. As a result, they would not feel aloof and enhance their social bonding. Nonetheless, there is a probability that too much involvement might distract students from study and impact their academic results. However, by incorporating strict guidlines such problems could be handled effectively.
To conclude, I believe that extra-curricular activities are as essential in student's lives as academic knowledge. Hence, from pupil's perspective this should be considered as advantageous step and should be given high priority
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6943231441 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02044544918 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655021834061 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7250162569 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205612989499 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668301837269 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633125170529 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130519827346 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676607412781 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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