It is widely believed that physical activities are beneficial for the physical and mental development of young children. I completely agree that academic institutes must make physical education mandatory.
Firstly, a lot of young people are interested in outdoor sports at a very young age. They are interested in participating in sports as an extracurricular activity. If school authorities provide them with different options sports and games, it will also help them decide on a sport which they want to pursue.
Secondly, physical education provides students with some physical activities which is necessary for growth and physical development of young people, it does not only help keep them fit but also helps in developing healthy habits, which they will endorse for rest of their lives.
lastly, a lot of academic institutes provide a full scholarship to the students who are really good at sports and want to make the sport as their career. If schools start giving students opportunities early, it can help them achieve their goals. However, It has also been observed when students are more focussed on playing sports they tend to suffer from bad academic grades.
Hence it is the responsibility of schools that physical activities should be performed in a balance.
In conclusion, for overall personality development, it is recommended that physical education is must, however, it should not be overtaking curriculum activities, and provide student equal chance to explore other activities as well.Physical activity also provide the opportunity for student to be more social and make more friends.It makes students more confident and make them leaders in their adult life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38113207547 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93607216497 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.8901567722 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196878355502 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784123016752 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485189829952 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111573806072 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297268114651 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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