It is necessary for parents attend a parenting training course to bring their children up.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no question that parenting is the greatest responsibility of our life and catastrophic mistakes are able to ruin the future of child. Many people believe that, nowadays the necessity of parenting course for parent is more prominent. I personally agree with the idea of taking parenting course.
It is undeniable that parents are the only persons who should bear the responsibility of the future of their child. Since many young people are become parent and the number of nuclear family is enhanced, parents requires a great deal of knowledge. Given the status que, participating in parenting courses would be immensely helpful. In addition, the outcome of being oblivious about how to foster a baby, sometimes would have been uncompensated. For instance, parent that are not aware of digestion problems and medical attentions of babies, will jeopardize their offspring’s life.
Moreover, taking parenting course before and after pregnancy plays a vital role for the father as well as the mother. Since it has a significant effect on father’s sense of responsibility. Hence, there was a belief that the role of the mother is more prominent because of having birth the babies. Thus, before passing these courses, fathers take less responsibilities for upbringing a baby particularly when one is infant. However, these training courses bring about raising knowledge and develop a sense of corporation between parents. New research demonstrate that parents who were trained at parenting courses, would have more intimacy after their baby born.
To conclude, due to the fact that mentioned, I would argue that parenting course is essential for becoming an apt parent. Consequently, it raises the knowledge of the parents and improves their relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ore passing these courses, fathers take less responsibilities for upbringing a baby ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42446043165 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02813822961 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5907025953 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349236379123 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118885541367 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754689922995 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235617336447 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030097645126 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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