It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up.
agree or disagree
Undoubtedly, with the advancement of technology, parenting and upbringing kids has become a hot debate in societies. Since the number of young parents and following on nuclear families are in rise, many scientists emphasize the importance of parenting training course for both fathers and mothers. I personally agree with this idea due to some reasons that will be argued in this essay.
To begin with, proper parents should have easy access to great deal of knowledge and dedication that lack of them can lead to catastrophic outcomes. The parents who participate in parenting training course are more likely to bringing up children who their behavior comply with standards of living. Many parents, especially from countryside are more oblivious to consequences of wrong methods of raising children. Therefore, attending in this course where experts share their opinions on different aspects of child fostering and right parenting can broaden the horizons of the parents. Indeed, these courses raise parents’ awareness about the all aspects of offspring’s life in terms of social, educational, medical, psychological and behavioral and, in turn parents learn to use a right reaction to the children’s behavior.
From the other hand, attending both fathers and mothers in these courses provide a unique experience for fathers to find a sense of responsibility. The role of fathers in raising child should be taken into consideration. In recent years, because of more financial issues, fathers have less time for spending time with their children’s, and sometimes are compelled to be at work all of their times, therefore, the children who raise in these families are suffer from lack of self-esteem, uncertainty, unable to making decision, unable to making friends, choosing job and so on. Therefore, this course can help fathers to understand their role as an indispensable part of raising children.
To sum up, due to the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that it is indeed a good idea for people to participate in parenting training course.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
...hildren who raise in these families are suffer from lack of self-esteem, uncertainty, ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...ion, unable to making friends, choosing job and so on. Therefore, this course can h...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35779816514 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06269074981 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9720705265 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386257419031 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130157042094 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996084287984 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221882020217 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722664695991 0.056905535591 127% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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