It is undeniable that internet has become an indispensable part of our lives. Irrespective of age, people use it every day for different purposes. However, there are billions of people who either do not have access to it or never used it. As far as I am concerned, although it is assisting us in leading our life, it is not essentially a must to survive.
To elaborate, internet is regularly used by many individuals for the sake of education, jobs, shopping and entertainment. Even many organizations use it for communication, trades, and maintaining loads of data related to their business. Additionally, birth of e-commerce made it much easy for public to order groceries, gadgets, and clothes in a single click. A good example is Amazon.com, who deliver any type of product to anywhere around the world. This was all possible only due to the emergence of internet and websites.
Furthermore, internet assists us in pursuing knowledge and even solutions for existing problems. For instance, remedies for health-related issues can be found on Google or Youtube, which thereby play a role of virtual doctor. This way, internet has turned in to a key element of many lives.
That being said, it is often forgotten that still a majority of people do not use internet either because of its’ unavailability or unaffordability. Rural areas and some poor nations are a good example for this. Nevertheless, these people are still able to fulfill their needs and wants. They still hold the traditional way of leading the life.
In essence, despite becoming a crucial ingredient of many peoples’ lives. Internet is not yet really a must. After all, food, shelter, clothing and good health are what humans need to happily live for a century.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ading our life, it is not essentially a must to survive. To elaborate, internet is r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, still, after all, even so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0724137931 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04619409333 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8724389086 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4210526316 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122391247303 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377609077691 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356781707504 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697438388439 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293637648091 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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