It is not necessary to have access to the Internet to live a full life.
What is your opinion?
Without any doubt, the internet has revolutionized modern lifestyle since it was introduced almost three decades ago. It has become one of the most imperative aspects of every day’s living all around the world. Although it is stated by some individuals that living a full life without internet is possible, I personally hold a controversial opinion. By way of my thinking, modern lifestyle would possess numerous deficiencies without internet.
First and foremost, the over-reliance of working activities to the internet is an undeniable fact these days. Globalization and rapid growth of technology in close correlation have made almost every business holder lean toward utilizing internet on its working system. From giant corporations to small retailers tend to use the internet for their vital tasks, such as advertising their services, sending and receiving various documents, dealing with their clients’ demands etc. Therefore, considering the critically competitive job market of today’s world, the likelihood of not being able to grow or even save your business in case of disconnecting from internet is extremely high.
On the other hand, not having a constant access to the internet could have noticeable negative impacts on personal life either. Nowadays, the internet has become not only the main source of gaining knowledge for vast members of whole societies, but also a key factor to connect with their friends and family. Without the internet, one would disable himself to develop his ideas and perceptions in life, immediately find the answer and solve the hindrances of everyday living and also lost track of his close relatives and friends. To exemplify, I successfully managed to teach myself how to play drums from tutorials available on Youtube web pages. In addition, I interact daily with my elder siblings as well as numerous of my friends living abroad via different social network applications. Accordingly, without constant access to the internet, the quality of my personal life would decrease to great extent.
Taken together, I firmly hold the view that internet is intrinsic to the high quality of life, particularly in this modernized period of time
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'constant access'.
Suggestion: constant access
...ly high. On the other hand, not having a constant access to the internet could have noticeable n...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...f life, particularly in this modernized period of time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39825581395 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94677265919 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622093023256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7736298223 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284304191632 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08773689078 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767895287697 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148028594593 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511835968672 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.