To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Metropolitan cities provide valuable information in a wide range of area. Economic, level of education are just two examples of social aspect information available in the big city. However, I believe that mere study of major cities in a country would not allow people to grasp the most significant trait of the society, since the small town and studying the history of the country as a whole would be as much as important major cities.
First, major cities are revolutionized with the emergence of technology and urbanization. After industrialization, giant corporations and companies run their office center in the major cities. Accordingly, This approach provokes the flood of individuals from small cities and villages to live in the urban area to find a proper career fitting their ability. This immigration makes a tremendous change in the community and adds various factors to the characteristics of the society. Therefore, reaching a conclusion regarding the most important characteristics of the society carries error that cannot be excluded from analysis.
Second, studying the history of a region plays a crucial role to comprehend the characteristics of a society and sometimes studying just the history of major cities of the region has bias information. For example, analyzing the Yazd city in the Yazd province would enable researchers to grasp valuable information. However, Bam city which is just one of the smallest village of the region plays a pivotal function to understand the society of the province. Bam city is a historical city where people of the region left it centuries ago because of the prevalence of drought in the village. As a matter of the fact, they economized and saved to fight against these kinds of problems in the future. As a result, the most important trait of inhabitants is being risk-averse. This example clarified the point that we should rule out the small cities and villages and studying the history of them should be considered by researchers.
In conclusion, I believe that big cities reflect the economic situation of the society. However, to have a well-rounded understanding regarding society, one should study the small cities as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10114974186 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485094850949 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8937016122 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.055555556 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373129769428 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126604862118 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223830312298 0.0758088955206 295% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333731438881 0.150359130593 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.333782869753 0.0667264976115 500% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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