It is often said that to become a successful Businessman a tertiary education is not at all necessary to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give your opinion and relevant example?
There is a school of thought that higher studies are not required to be a well-recognised entrepreneur. However, I partially agree with this notion because education is always needed by a person to touch milestones. This essay will discuss both the sides of the statement and give a balanced opinion.
To begin with, education plays an indispensable role in everyone's life. It enhances an individual business skills, especially in decision making capabilities which is the most essential factor for a growing company. Moreover, university education not only sharpens the interpersonal skills but also boosts the confidence of a person, if compared to others. For instance, the chairman of Reliance Group of Industries Mukesh Ambani is an MBA passout from Harvard University, and is successfully running his business all across the globe. Thus, education has always been a backbone in a person's success.
On the other hand, there are other people who have started their business with an innovative idea without giving importance to education. Explaining in detail, they have taken one unique thought and have started working on it, and with the continuous hard work and dedication, they are able to achieve their renowned status. To illustrate this point, the founder of OYO hotels is a school dropout and with his one new idea, now he owns a chain of hotels and restaurants across India.
In conclusion, I opine by saying that undoubtedly education is always found to be useful for being a successful person. Although, there are also some other individuals who do not have higher studies, still with their different approach they are able to succeed in their business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19926199262 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88276206533 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7937410679 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154469027335 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566390631633 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435248781488 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955443561079 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416286462988 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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