In this contemporary era, juvenile adequacies are proliferating speedily. In most of the police cases, the culprits are the youngsters. Some people believe that media is responsible for the inclination in the crime committed by the younglings. I agree with the statement and have given my reasons for the advancement of teenager crime and solutions for the same in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Predominantly, the content in some of the programs or news is very violent, which negatively influence the mind of a teenager. Moreover, almost every teenager have a role model whom he or she admire. But, if this role model commits any type of adequacy, it gives a bad impression on young people's mind. For instance, the heroes of action movies perform many stunts like rash car driving in their movies, which in turn, causes death to many people. And after observing such kind of activities, teenagers tries to follow their favourite actors without knowing the fact that action heroes perform such stunts under supervision, which leads to them to the crime of murder. Thus, media plays a pivotal role in growth of teenage crime.
In order to diminish the crime committed by adolescents, relevant steps should be taken by their parents as well as government. Firstly, parents should gave a regular check on their kids. Children should use media under parents' observations. Secondly, the government should conduct seminars in order to aware the juveniles about the right usage of media and its content. Also, media should also be warned by government to stop posting violent contents. Thus, appropriate steps taken by the people and government can lower the crime rates.
To recapitulate, media should not spread violence for its own benefits. Also, general awareness is the only way to reduce the rate of juvenile crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...agraphs. Predominantly, the content in some of the programs or news is very violent, which...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'admires'.
Suggestion: admires
...enager have a role model whom he or she admire. But, if this role model commits any ty...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence for its own benefits. Also, general awareness is the only way to reduce the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74320077553 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7103844724 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210289310287 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645248219013 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539910564572 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140512797464 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573484728733 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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