It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
it is believe by certain people that by exploring different regions of the world, one can brodern his horizon. I completely agree with the above statement because when you travel, you interact with people of different culture and languages and it definitely enhances your outlook towards life. In this essay, I will discuss how travelling affects our personal development.
Travelling encourges people to think about the live from different angles. In certain parts of the world, independence is deaply embadded in the fabric of society, while other societies only teach depending on others. For instance, last year when I visted USA, I observed that most of the people are not depending on others for house-hold chores and every member of the family is doing an earner. On the hand. In Pakistan, where I am from, people depends on others for daily chores and usually one of the mother,or father is the only full time earner for the whole family and other members depend on her, or him for food.
By tourism people come to know that some societies are very caring towards nature and want to minize their carbon foot print on the environment. If you spend your whole life in a country where people do not think much about the nature, you will never me able to understand the importance of preservation of natural habitat. Five years ago, as a part of international school trip, I visted Norway. I was surprised to see most of the people use bicyle when they go to work and when asked about the reason, they told me that they do not want to burn fuel in to the breathing air. Thus, by exploring different cultures you not only enhance your understanding about the world, but also learn to spend your life in a better way.
To conclude, it is believed by people that tourism is broadening our understanding about the world and I firmly agree with this opinion. It encourages people to question their way of spending life and people learn new culture and methods to live their life in a more beneficial way. I recommend everyone should visit a new country in every five years to take benefits from others and increase their understanding of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76266666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54432702301 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517333333333 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4027141506 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154533734151 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518521419495 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529219232983 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987395801896 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338885558136 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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