A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is believed that the onus of keeping oneself fit and health is entirely relying on the shoulder of an individual and the government has nothing to do with it. I partially agree with this statement. Although health is the personal responsibility of a citizen, government certainly also has a big role to play in this regard.
It is the responsibility of central government to provide basic health facilities and sports amenities in order to keep the citizens physically fit and healthy. Firstly, if state provides modern hospitals, people health will be better taken care of. People can consultant with best doctors and take precautions and medicines which will keep their health on track. In addition, the city council can provide sports and fitness centers in each area of the district. When people have these amenities available in their neighborhood, they are more likely to visit there, and work out which will also improve their immune system. Thus, the above measures add value to the well being of individuals.
On the other hand, Individuals must keep themselves physically fit and healthy by taking care of their diet and regular exercise. Nowadays, when most of the high calories products are with in the access of citizens, people tend to overeat which ultimately destroys their health and cause diseases such as diabetes and high cholesterol. Therefore, by education and regular exercise, we can cater the above issues. Firstly, basic nutritional knowledge should be included in the school curriculum so that people can easily differentiate between high calories junk food , such as cold drink and sodas, and healthy food. In addition, people must build a habit of regular exercise of at least half-hour per day. it will not only keep their health on track, but also saves them from possible diseases that comes with the age due to weak immune system.
All in all, citizens health responsibility can be shared between themselves and government. Individual should keep a balance healthy lifestyle, which includes eating healthy food and regular exercise, while government should provide best health amenities , such as state of the art hospitals and fitness centers. When individuals are healthy, they will be a strong nation and working force of a country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17886178862 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72417809906 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533875338753 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.71809418 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197718775093 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071158502501 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786840710237 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150701723971 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108328087894 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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