One of the most important issues facing the world todays is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the globe is going through food crises in which from multiple solutions, the most effective solution can be the production of food through scientific methods and technology. I consider that this is a good solution to the problem to meet the food requirement of people.
I firmly believe that, using technology and science experiments on the natural resources to overcome the food crises can be beneficial in multiple ways. Firstly, by doing proper research and development we can have more knowledge about natural resources which can help us to get as much as possible use of the resources as we can. This will benefit us to increase the production and we can get more output than the input. For example by using proper fertilizers and chemicals we can get more crops as by doing this our crops will be more protected from insects and harmful creatures. Furthermore, a single seed can be fertilized in a proper manner i.e. under observation of scientist to get more fruit from it.
Secondly, the farmer can get more profit from it, as the less land will be consumed to grow more crops. However, it requires a specific knowledge and study about crops in agriculture field, which needs to be known before putting hands on it. In addition to it, we can save money and time, as by doing the fertilization of crops in a proper manner there will be more chances to get more product out of it in less time. For example, multiple watermelons and fruits of different sizes, color and shapes can be produced on a single plant. In addition, trees or plants can live more than there time by keeping them under observation and in proper environment.
Overall, the most common rather tremendous problems of food crisis is increasing day by day which can be controlled through technology and knowledge about agriculture. These can help us to increase the production of food. Moreover, it can also help to get more profit from less land, which can reduce time and money. However, this can leave bad effects if proper research and development in not done. Therefore, we need to get the knowledge about these methods to get hand on the techniques.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7972972973 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67540402661 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9019861436 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.411764706 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0679199320811 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319688865916 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441629514425 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681557470817 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625028189082 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.