A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
health of citizens is crucial for a nation's development and growth. Some argue that onus is on government to administer well being of taxpayers, I partially agree to this thought. In this essay I will analyze how to preventing adulterated foods and creating awareness to maintain healthy life style contribute to improve community's overall health alongside the responsibilities of an individual in maintaining a good physical, mental and physiological condition.
there is ample evidence indicating authoritiy's hand in ensuring citizens health. The central reason for this is two fold, firstly, blocking impure foodstuff from reaching citizens. Consuming contaminated food is one of primary reasons for deteriorating health of many. Since it is the job of government to regulate the food that goes on shelves, foods that cause imbalance of health should be banned. Secondly, creating awareness of fitness and efficient measures to combat any seasonal virus or diseases. The role of government in promoting healthy lifestyle by organizing awareness to make people conscious of their health choices is unmatched. Furthermore, vaccination and preventive measures are pivotal in tackling various life threatening diseases such as polio,measles and so on. Also timely disinfection and keeping the communities hygiene is the duty of governments. To illustrate this, a report from WHO suggests that Brazilian government by ensuring 100% vaccination to its citizens has eradicated polio from its country resulting in improved health. Therefore it is possible to state that government;s role is undeniable in corroborating citizen's health.
Although there is a case for government being responsible for individual's health, a person's role in perpetuating health is understated. lifestyle habits cannot be controlled by any leadership. public from different occupations of life require specific protein intake and fitness regimes.Moreover, Self understanding and analyzing of physical and mental health is significant in timely treatment of numerous problems.Thus it is conclusively clear that it is the common sense of individuals that is vital in maintain health.
With everything said, even if citizens maintain a healthy lifestyle by monitoring fitness and mental health, I believe that government has much larger role to play in making certain that every householder leads a healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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health of citizens is crucial for a nations development and growth. Some argue that...
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...seases such as polio,measles and so on. Also timely disinfection and keeping the com...
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...s country resulting in improved health. Therefore it is possible to state that government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70224719101 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26832089529 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5678958114 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.411764706 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180665788799 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549069254594 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048624755615 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112692377755 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278194461009 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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