It is a tendency of human beings that they copy from each other. This spreads the popularity of fashion, lifestyle and consumer goods and help these industries to grow.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses have grown on a large scale in recent times due to a reckless increase in population and their adaptation of inventions and innovations. Most industries are booming as a result of new trends and modernism which raising the demand for certain things. I completely agree with the assertion as demand and supply of such propensity are directly proportionate with each other.
With the advent of groundbreaking media technologies, it has become quite easy to break out any latest trend in the market with the help of Facebook, YouTube, Instagram, and TV Shows. People start to notice immediately such things and try to adapt, which is an opportunity for different industries to earn and boost. Subsequently, companies are more fashion-centric to cope up with the demand for people’s lifestyles. Smartphones, for instance, are pretty much in trend. Apple and Samsung are the world’s leading technology companies to meet the demand for best latest mobile phones. That’s why they have grown exceptionally in this industry.
On a further note, people have become more sensitive with a huge difference in social classes. Most of them try to cope up with the lifestyle of elite or upper-middle-class people. Consequently, new fashion arrivals become popular due to a large number of followers, and particularly those industries take advantage of this tendency which helps them to grow immensely. A rather illustrative example is excessive usage of branded products. Multi-billionaire companies around the world are earning their money from brands campaigning.
The conclusion to be drawn is that media has played a key role in rolling fashions and latest trends worldwide and many less privileged people of society show their desire to have the same lifestyle which they see on different media which is helping many industries to grow on a massive scale.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'best the latest'.
Suggestion: best the latest
...nology companies to meet the demand for best latest mobile phones. That’s why they have gro...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... fashion arrivals become popular due to a large number of followers, and particularly those indus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29966329966 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12427070926 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4479791265 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145404983516 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042641742284 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508780630932 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910971825097 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325863697521 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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