Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
In today's busy world time management is one of the main priority of a person and Large shopping malls have decently fulfills that purpose. Some people says small shops are best for purchasing day to day items. Others think large shopping malls are far better than shopping in a small shops. I am in the favor of large shopping malls because of these reasons.
Firstly, All provisions are available at under one roof and we do not have to go anywhere else to buy other things. That saves us a lot of time if you are living in a metropolitan city, You may be aware of traffic now days it getting worse and gravely worse each and every day.
Secondly, All the provisions and other items can be available in wholesale rates and it is cheaper to buy from large shopping malls because they buy these items directly from the companies and there is no middleman between them. So they can sell it in cheaper rates besides small shops.
Finally, Everyday we got a news from news channel that a bogus company are making fake goods in market. Because they are buying in bulk from the companies, It is sure that the product you are buying is 100% original. So Its quality will be flawless and very rich.
In other words, buying provisions from large shopping malls can save you time, money and they have good quality items. There are many other advantages but these are the major factor to buy goods from large shopping malls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...mall shops. Finally, Everyday we got a news from news channel that a bogus company ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.578125 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22379213616 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9739950719 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164399348499 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757369065038 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794937895001 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954386511546 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963005097145 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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