Shopping has been a trend from long past. How people buy their needs has changed drastically since the beginning of humanity's adventure. Although in past people preferred to shop goods from the local market, they are now in favor of buying items from huge shopping malls. This essay will argue why shopping malls are replacing local small shops.
There are plethora of reasons why customers now choose shopping malls instead of local shops to shop the goods. Firstly, being a time-saver, shopping centers provide a wide range of recreation sources as well as household stores under one roof due to which a customer do not need move from one place to another in search of different items they require. For instance, a shopping mall itself consists of cinema, eating hubs, shops, et cetera, which help the customers in saving their time. Consequently, shopping at malls results in saving time, the most valuable asset in modern life.
Secondly, shopping plazas unlike small local shops, provide a discount on almost everything on some specials eves in order to attract shoppers toward them. This consequently temp the buyers as they find it to be a money-saver deal. For example, on occasion of New Year, Christmas eve, et cetera, every shopping center provides a discount of at least 50% to its customers in order to maintain regularity in their number. However, there are no such schemes or discounts provided by local markets. Thus, interest of people is inclining towards shopping malls rather than local shops which is responsible for replacement of local ones by the malls.
This essay argued why small shops are being replaced by shopping plazas. In my opinion, shopping plazas are widely visited by shoppers as they act as time as well as money saver.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...ora of reasons why customers now choose shopping malls instead of local shops to shop th...
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Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to move'?
Suggestion: to move
...oof due to which a customer do not need move from one place to another in search of ...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ount of at least 50% to its customers in order to maintain regularity in their nu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99659863946 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48719474919 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3275493365 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219651640303 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925756912843 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831868188349 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158807589722 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340159751592 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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