Some people say that attendance should be made compulsory in educational institutions. Others believe that it should be optional. Which of these two views do you support and why?

Education is one of the major assets to be possessed by any human being. Most of the institutes now provide facilities of attending as well as non-attending classes. Although some people believe that regular attendance should be mandatory while others do not. This essay will argue why appearance in classes should be made obligatory.
Certain people percept that attending the lecture-room should be mandatory for students because it is responsible for enhancing their theoretical as well as practical skills; resulting in their good performance at the time of examinations. Moreover, it is indispensable to learn and understand from a teacher rather than depending on any other source like internet. For instance, The Times of India newspaper once published an article in which it stated that pupils with regular appearance in classes were found to be more excellent in studies as compared to those of irregular. That is why; constant presence of children in classrooms should be marked requisite.
On other hand, another bunch of people opine that students should be given a right to choose whether to attend a class or not because there are numerous children who are not financially sound to pay the institutes and need to earn to continue their study. For example, in this contemporary world, it is difficult for middle-class families to make their wards educated because of shortage of money. As a result, youngsters are more prone to get employed at an early age. Thus, if the attendance will be marked compulsory by every institute, it would be difficult for a lot of young-lings to opt for further studies.
In conclusion, this essay argued why students should be forced to attend the classes on regular basis. In my opinion, attending a class is in more favor of a child than studying through any other medium.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nding as well as non-attending classes. Although some people believe that regular attend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05980066445 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88167632709 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4434294466 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324075379991 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120274540933 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946114437491 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220014131917 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092109461475 0.056905535591 162% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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