In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology. For example, the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
In information technology (IT) there have been enormous advancement in last two decades such as the Web and email. I am of the opinion that these developments in IT will be beneficial in the future of humankind, though some of the people have opposing view.
To begin, email has taken the communication on a different level. It is way faster and convenient than traditional communication practices. Consequently, it benefits commerce and business. Furthermore, the World Wide Web means that bunch of information regarding any subject is available on a single click. For example, individuals can access news, online educational courses, medical advice and much more via the internet. Besides this, improvements in IT has helped researches in many fields such as in an automobile industry, medical industry, and educational system. It is evident that these developments have made life far more easier and convenient of many people and will continue to do so.
Nonetheless, this advancement has some negative effects too. For instance, many argued that the widespread use of email is destroying traditional forms of communication such as letter writing, telephone and face-to-face conversation. This could affect persons’ basic ability to socialize and interact with each other. In addition, also there has been declined in the traditional forms of reading, that is to say, in lieu of books and newspapers usage of Web has significantly increased to look for certain information.
In conclusion, although this improvement in IT has some drawbacks, it is certainly true that, in such a fast pace world development in IT have made easier and convenient life of many people. And, hence, even in future the advantages of this will overweight the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
In information technology IT there have been enormous advancement in last two d...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...cial in the future of humankind, though some of the people have opposing view. To begin...
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Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...t these developments have made life far more easier and convenient of many people and will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, nonetheless, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35971223022 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21383905186 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7376091296 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30228322964 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822346769759 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611726917072 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169481976774 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702549316269 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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