The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
every well functional organization is based on a leader who has a good knowledge and well understood back round about the business he or she is running. it is often thought, that a director of the organization or the business will be led by an older person. This essay will argue why not only older people but also the younger generation can lead a business.
we can find that many companies are led by older people. As older people have more work experience and a wider range of skills, they have a better understanding of the field than younger competitors. If the organization falls to crises then the fast action is necessary all those wise knowledge and skill experience can not turn crises to profit. For example, in 2008 market crush Estonia t-shirt company was falling apart. founder of the company was directed by an older gentleman. he decided to sell everything and that was a smart move. Over 70 per cent of different organisations bankrupted. Acknowledging the fact of bankruptcy he saved thousands of euros. All the credit goes to a very smart and wise leader who bought same-store up after the reaction with half-price he sold it.
Even though older people have more knowledge they tend to stick to old patterns and ways. Today the modern world is involving very fast and to keep up with tempo it is necessary to have leaders who can adapt fast with the changing environment. old ways do not work any more and are replaced with ideals. The way we used to communicate and market our business is drastically changed. For example, two companies which sold watches had totally different ways to market their products. The older company was a founder may years before, but the director of the company was an old man with old ways. With the rise of internet shopping, one young man tried luck and opened an online store which sells watches. Within three years his business was two times more profitable than the older wiser man with old ways.
To conclude the fact that the modern world needs persons who can keep up with the tempo. More then often those are young persons with new ideas and ways. I do not fully agree that every successful company need an old and wise leader, sometimes what we need is a young person with new ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69017632242 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48872617431 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511335012594 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5173212531 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9565217391 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04347826087 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207156048576 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559511273709 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527754833228 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140909136339 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055064115429 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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