Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that choosing a foreign country to live can cause many social and practical setbacks. While I agree with this idea, I believe most problems can be solved little by little as time passes.
On the one hand, there are various nations along with different traditions where people may want to live. These traditions are sometimes as extremely important as other country rules which people expect you to know and respect. Thus, having no familiarity with the culture the community is likely to create a tremendous pressure on both new immigrants and inhabitants. For example, in my homeland, Iran, people have an indifferent trait which doesn’t express their authentic feelings about things or even each other. As a result, this trait called “Tarof” doesn’t make sense for a foreigner who may get in trouble and confuse about individual real purpose. Additionally, lack of knowledge and lack of speaking proficiency can be considered as a huge misunderstanding among people.
On the other hand, I believe that people from all over the world would finally be able to interact with each other in a peaceful way. The more time is spent by travelers in another country, they will be more likely to get acquainted with new cultures and conventions. To overcome cultural and social issues, for instance, having an intimate native friend brings out a long term advantages to live and avoid verity of problems. What is more, when it comes to practical obstacles, if individuals put their efforts to improvise the language barrier in the host country, this would be an influential step for productive communication and interaction at work with natives.
In conclusion, I do not believe that social and practical difficulties because of language barrier in a foreign country are an insurmountable problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a peaceful way" with adverb for "peaceful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99551496979 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3615309315 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206400811425 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725586648026 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747656480609 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138383376069 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508264613136 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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