Major countries nowadays face traffic problems. Describe the situation in your country and discuss possible ways to overcome it.
Today traffic jams is the a widespread problem in high-developed and industrialized countries. This problem causes lots of inconveniences and threats to people’s health. There are many possible ways to tackle this issue or, at least, to slightly decrease amount of cars on the road. In this essay I will tell about the traffic situation in Ukraine and possible solutions to resolve traffic density.
To begin with, the economic problems and instability which occurred in Ukraine have significantly lessened amount of cars on the road for the last 3 years. People can’t afford to maintain any sort of private transport due lack of finances. However, this problem is still relevant to my native country, despite the economic. The big cities, such as Kyiv, Dnepr, Lvov are overwhelmed by cars in peak hours when people are going to their work. Let’s discuss possible ways to diminish traffic tension.
The subway is the best solution to less the traffic density. The main advantage of this variant is that underground will encourage people do not use cars when unnecessary, because it will spare their money and time. Moreover, the subway is ecological clean and doesn’t pollute the atmosphere. So, building of the subway will benefit population and allows governments to overcome not only traffic issue.
The next decision the government can do is imposing so called ‘green taxes’ for car drivers. This variant allows to control carbon dioxide emissions emitted to the atmosphere and obliterate ozone layer. Taking to the account, lack of money and poverty in Ukraine, it could be very effective and encourage people to use local transport more frequent.
In conclusion, traffic problem is one of the major concerns in high-populated countries. There are few possible ways to address the problem. The most efficient is building of a subway, however not every government can afford it due economical or geographical issues. So, the possible solution for all countries is compelling people to pay taxes for using cars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; a
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Message: Did you mean 'controlling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: controlling
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'at least', 'in conclusion', 'sort of', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277922077922 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101298701299 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415584415584 0.0501214627716 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0207792207792 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0805194805195 0.122226691241 66% => OK
Participles: 0.0207792207792 0.0403226058552 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89252668459 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0441558441558 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207792207792 0.021408717616 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00779220779221 0.011925033212 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2048.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2629969419 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409785932722 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.333333333333 0.28420135186 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232415902141 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137614678899 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89252668459 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581039755352 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.5968295251 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.35 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6331975162 49.517814964 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 49.6833333333 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.84810126582 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362515704297 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0659629637685 0.102741220458 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0374010334292 0.0668466124924 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515098248599 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0877540795998 0.148594505496 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139001372807 0.134430193775 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06803769957 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372299585619 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0622890659004 0.0638462369009 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237650510894 0.228012699653 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04125603427 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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