In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is undeniably true that accelerating crime rate, occupied lifestyles and less reliability on other individuals are the various reasons that cohorts residing in city’s are ignorant of the neighbours. A potential effort to organize various social events and building more public places would harness this issue to a much greater extent.
To embark on, in this swamped and sedentary lifestyle, people are highly unlikely to pay attention towards the world outside their house such as the neighborhood. A Commoner in particular, starts his day; by waking up and preparing his meal there by leaving for work;, lastly when he gets back home tired, meeting and interacting with other people outside the home would be the last place one could think of off. Consequently, the social life with the neighbours becomes aborted. A survey recently conducted Alexandra University stated that 800 out of 1000 people were not even aware of the name of the next neighbours, clearly elucidating the scenario.
Apart from this, surging rates of unlawful acts make people cautious in regard to becoming friendly with strangers, even if it is their adjacent neighbours. This is because several news channels such as BBC news Republic TV channels etcetera keep people attentive about the rise in criminal activities that could harm their life, which is why they fail to rely upon any individual residing in the society.
Looking at a diverse angle of this phenomenon, setting a bunch of social activities by the societies administrators, for the inhabitants would result in ameliorating people’s relations with their closest neighbours. As evidence, in some nations such as the United Nations, government officials regularly organise some occasions which renders a potential opportunity for the inhabitants to know their next-doors. Subsequently, a possible initiative by authorities to construct public parks and more communal areas ought to be taken so that city dwellers acquired ample opportunities to blend with their immediate neighbours.
To conclude, although the cause of being much occupied and the inclination illegal activities stands as causes by resident’s obliviousness for their adjoining neighbours, nevertheless, it could be combated by preventive measures to be taken by officials to conduct social activities and designing parks, specifically.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'citys'.
Suggestion: citys
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, in particular, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54143646409 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01669600873 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3982898785 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.166666667 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894477410042 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335347595099 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0157246488603 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487134136369 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174944503588 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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