One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. You enjoyed the meal and had been happy to be introduced to his/her family.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• thank your friend and say that you enjoyed the meal
• say what else you liked about this visit
• ask your friend to meet you someday at a restaurant
Dear Elly,
Hope you are in the best of your health and making the most of your stay at home. My letter is in regards to the warm welcome and a wonderful hospitality shown by you and your family the other day at the dinner you invited me to.
Let me start by praising the savory Indian food your mother prepared. Not only the yummy ‘fritters’ served in the starters, but also the blend of mouth-watery Indian Spices was just beyond expectations. How can i not talk about the most special ‘rice porridge’ your mother served in the desert, sprinkled with saffron and rose petals reminded me of my mother’s handmade dishes.
The reason that I loved such a cosy vibe at your place was the friendly behaviour of your mother. Just when she told me that she belongs to the same city that i do, I could relate to her so much more. I was so happy when your mother and I were discussing the beautiful things of our hometown ‘Chandigarh’.
I was wondering if you and your mother could join me to dine out at ‘Amico’s that serves the best Italian cuisines like Pasta, Pizzas and Panzanella in the town. I am sure you both will love it.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanks and Regards,
Angel Justin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...most of your stay at home. My letter is in regards to the warm welcome and a wonderful hospit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... that she belongs to the same city that i do, I could relate to her so much more....
^
Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sta, Pizzas and Panzanella in the town. I am sure you both will love it. Look...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5990990991 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54969677734 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1187044944 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0833333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265234395179 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957962989126 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715202745954 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142478081045 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835561464958 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.