Many universities charge higher fees for foreign students Why do they do this Do you believe that it is fair

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Many universities charge higher fees for foreign students. Why do they do this? Do you believe that it is fair?

There is not even a speck of doubt that there are ample of universities having a dual policy in case of their tuition fees as they charge foreign students higher than the locals. The prime reasons for overcharging relates to restrict rising influx of international students and enforcing national privilege, I believe, and this is purely fair even though it is against being treated equally.

To begin with, different fee structure for local and international students gives an impression of not being equal, especially when we are fighting for the equal rights in every nation; the discrimination between such differences in the fees seems unfair to some. For example, international students often need to pay up to 400 percent more than the local students when it comes to taking higher education in countries such as Australia, New Zealand and Canada.

However, the university authority often states that this is a policy that ensures better educational environment in university campuses. First reason they mention to support their argument is the government’s obligation to its dwellers. To be precise, a government has a direct obligation to educate its citizens while educating the international students is not direct. This also ensures that authorities are enforcing a natural privilege to its citizens while using the extra income from foreign students. Moreover, citizens of any nation are tax payers and they have right to education, thus, the government have to do everything in order to educate its people first. Finally, higher university education costs help to control the international students flow in a country.

To conclude, providing some opportunities to the local university students is not a bad idea when the funds are collected from outside learners in the form of higher tuition fees. This ideology not only improve education system for every child, but also make the nation flourish by leaps and bounds.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29773462783 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89420282053 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1428939997 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.416666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257533183997 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861456404457 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436365899273 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143865161164 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412506717735 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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