In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. what do you think are the main cause of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
Today, escalating the rate of crimes in societies is a crucial concern for inhabitants. there are several reasons, which cause this problem, and some possible solutions to deal with it, which I will explain now.
When it comes to crimes, some social obstacles are responsible for increasing the rate of crimes in societies. From an economic point of view, inflation and unemployment impart financial pressure on families. so, families experience difficulties in satisfying their families' basic needs and desires, which launches people on the path of contributing to some crimes including pickpocketing, shoplifting and so forth. Besides that, nowadays, people have an inherent tendency to use technology in their life. For instance, they use the internet to do daily works like shopping, paying bills. However, because of lacking appropriate security infrastructures and knowledge, the rate of cybercrime has increased.
there are some possible solutions that may be effective in controlling all kinds of crime. Firstly, governments had better supervise the economic situation in order that they can choose projects through which citizens have en opportunity to accommodate their basic needs. For example, by creating job opportunities and financial supports, governments make a profound contribution to decreasing the rate of crimes. Furthermore, it is vital that people become knowledgeable enough about the drawbacks of using technical devices, which is achievable through running social clubs, brochures and so forth. Last but not least, provided that companies improve the substructure of their applications and use firm policy, they can reduce the rate of cybercrime
In conclusion, although there are many reasons, which lead to an increasing rate of crime, some possible solutions exist through which the government and business companies can make a standard level of safety for homo sapiens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67595818815 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03640494745 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9844565639 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113419926098 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387311456635 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372856594829 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828033532288 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377585953691 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.