In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime ? How can we deal with those causes ?
Today, the increase in the level of crime is an alarming problem for the whole society. This is mainly due to the lack of security guarantees on the street and financial conditions. However, it has some solutions which can attack this problem.
To begin with, there are many reasons the percentage of crime is rising, and one of them is the low of security on the street. It is clear that most crime runs in dark streets with a low number of police officers, which makes everyone feel unsafe while walking through it, and they are getting off this street easily after conducting any criminal action. For instance, a pickpocket is the common type of criminal who picks others' pockets and wallets on dimly-lit streets. Another cause is that most individuals don't have enough budget to pay for their living, so it is easy for them to turn to crime to pay bills and meet family responsibility. According to a recent study, the percentage of people living in poor households is more than two times higher than wealthy people ( 39,8 per 1000 people compared to 16,9 per 1000 people)
However, it has several solutions which can deal with this problem. First, it is clear that the government should increase the level of security on the street at night by various methods, such as police patrolling and attaching more CCTV cameras on each angle of the street. As a result, it will put people off behavior criminals if they intend to act. Moreover, to deal with the poverty problem, the government should think about both increasing social benefits and creating more training programs for alleviated individuals so that they can not only get out of poverty status, but also put off criminal intentions. According to a recent study, 36% of poverty in 79 countries was escaped extreme poverty by receiving social benefits.
To conclude, the popularity of both low budget and the unsafe guarantee on the street is the main reason which led to the increase in the crime rate. Only when we have a choice to raise the police night patrol at street level and the participation of the government in raising the social benefits, will this situation be remedied.
problem, the government should think about both increasing social benefits and creating more training programs for alleviating individuals so that they can not only get out of poverty status, but also put off criminal intentions. According to a recent study, 36% of poverty in 79 countries was escaped extreme poverty by receiving social benefits.
To conclude, the popularity of both low budget and the unsafe guarantee on the street is the main reason which led to the increase in the crime rate. Only when we have a choice to raise the police night patrol at street level and the participation of the government in raising the social benefits, will this situation be remedied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83197831978 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5417656089 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9412996108 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174936554161 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582843019931 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444572195185 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102443944904 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00643921060651 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.