In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
Trend of encouraging children to voluntarily participate in paying jobs is prevalent in some nations. Although, it is considered to be damaging to child’s physical and psychological growth, I entirely disagree with this view, I believe that participating in work environment at an early age helps child to adjust to reality of adulthood later, making him financially responsible, resourceful and teaches practicality of skills learnt in school. However, a child should not be indulged in work in extremes to deterrent to his education or physical growth. This essay shall discuss the merits of getting indulged in work environment at early age.
Being in employment is entirely different from being a student or than a staying in a safe niche created by parents, resulting in failure to cope up with work stress in many people in later part of life. Exposing child to a work environment early in life teaches a child work ethics, how to cope up and manage stress and make them financially responsible. All of which gives a child edge over others who have never been employed in their lives.
Furthermore, working early in lives although part time undoubtedly provides a child economic benefits, which he can utilize for leisure or study. Take for instance, it is a trend to take a gap year after school and before going to university to travel abroad or take up some hobby or learn some skill, rather than being burden on family financially a child can utilize his own earned money to opt any option and enrich his experience.
In addition, work place can act as a laboratory, where a child can execute skills learnt in school. To exemplify if a child is working as an accountant in a restaurant, he can imply his skills of core subjects such as computers and mathematics in accounting and further sharpen them.
That being said, while working a child should not let his education or health suffer. There is a chance that few children loose interest studies and may never want to go to school again. parents and authorities can keep check on that. Authorities should set a certain age and limited hours for a child to get involved in work to avoid any malpractice.
To sum up with, getting indulged in a work environment at an early age enriches child ‘s intellect and finances, makes him acquainted to real world reality and provide a chance to practice and strengthen their skills. However, there should be a balance between work, education and health of a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91232227488 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82011329831 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530805687204 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1845036372 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.941176471 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8235294118 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19088245275 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658850805367 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344698621592 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103210989023 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374383716318 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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