The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of
the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the
fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
The framework of society has tremendously changed in last two decades; women are now equally contributing in finances of house rather than managing the household. I believe that this trend has a negative impact on growing child. Being alone is pushing him into plunges of depression and hence negative behavioral attributes. other than that without any parental guidance child’s naïve brain is not able to choose right and wrong amongst external influence, hence can make wrong choices. This essay will discuss the negative impact of absent mother from household on development of child.
In case of both working parents, a child is left alone at home or in playschools and has no one to share personal experiences, fears and desires and has negative impact on his psychology and results in development of various mental abnormalities. It has been evidentially proved that child growing in absence of parents are more aggressive and have a pessimistic outlook towards life. In a study conducted by British Psychiatric organization children of working parents are more criminally inclined than controls
Furthermore, Children are exposed to both negative and positive external influences, and child’s naïve brain is not able to differentiate amongst those if not guided properly. Children growing in alone houses has no one to guide them through path of life and are usually end up in deplorable situations.
Although a child’s upbringing is not mother’s sole responsibility, father should share equal responsibility. A mother should not be deprived of her other rights just because of her gender. For a balanced and overall development of a child both parent’s contribution is mandatory. But since ages mothers are usually held responsible for development and behavioral attributes of a child, which is wrong up to an extent
To sum up with, absence of mothers from household has a negative impact on psychology of a child, resulted in detrimental behavioral habits and poor choices in life in the absence of proper parental guidance
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...em through path of life and are usually end up in deplorable situations. Althou...
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...ther rights just because of her gender. For a balanced and overall development o...
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... the absence of proper parental guidance
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12300265164 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5896259006 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.615384615 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0635841894203 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244666243781 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430290160062 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.033652918387 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233105091543 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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