Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to make families closer?
Family members of today’s society are not as close knit as they used to be. This change can be attributed to economic needs and over indulgence in technological advances. Cumulative efforts by society and authorities are needed to bridge this increasing gap in between the members of a family. This essay shall discuss the reasons of this paradigm shift and the remedial actions needed for reformation
Financial reasons and urge to do well in life is huge driving force behind the trend of migration to foreign land or to bigger cities. In the last decade a huge surge in migration rate has seen in developing nations. In quest of better life and job opportunities, more and more people are opting to migrate leaving their families behind which result in physical separation at first and then the mental separation. For instance, when a person moves to a foreign land, at first he gets busy in establishing himself in a new country and then later on gets busy in new culture and new life, which isolates him from his family back home.
In addition, technology whose original intent was to bring distant people closer is paradoxically, now the reason of mental separation between the people living under same roof. For instance, young children are more intrigued and indulged in talking their online friends or playing online games, rather than to talk to their own family members sitting at the same dining table, hence resulting in social isolation.
First of all, authorities should intervene and should create more job opportunities for qualified people so that they don’t feel the need to move abroad or to migrate to bigger cities and can stay closer to the rest of family members. Secondly, at the home front, all family’s members should actively try to stay close to each other and good quality time should be devoted for interactive sessions amongst family members. For instance, complete ban on using mobile phones or any other gadget while dining may help.
To sum up with, increasing distance between members of same clan can be attributed to misuse or overindulgence in gadgets, financial reasons and to urge to fulfil the age old quest of better life. Reformative steps should be taken by both governments as well as by society members to halt this progressive trend separation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01554404145 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68927390811 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554404145078 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2225782014 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.285714286 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20146795846 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769594866703 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730578822049 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112683044366 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06606960952 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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