Smoking cigarettes is injurious to health. In many countries there is ban on smoking in public places like the Garden and playground, railway stations and airports, even indoor environment such as offices and theaters. This essay agrees with the statement firstly because, it is harmful not only for the smoker but also the non-smoker and secondly smoking pollutes the environment.
Smoking causes many diseases such as cancer, respiratory and cardiovascular disorders in the long run while, it reduces the stamina, causes cough and sore throat to name a few immediate effects of smoking in the short run. The above health issues can be afflicted upon even those who are passive smokers. Recent studies have confirmed that, the ill effects of smoking are as dangerous for the non-smoker as it is for the smoker himself, if not worse. Hence in the spirit of good health and sensitivity to others, the smokers should go to a distant place and smoke privately.
On the other hand, it has many effects on the environment such as, it pollutes the air quality of premises, and the stench of the smoke remains in the area for a long time causing uneasiness in breathing. The waste that is generated due to smoking also need to be cleaned, which is another task for the Government, restaurants and bars which allow smoking. For instance, the smoking friendly Cafes’ and clubs need to redecorate the arrangements after the mess created by the customers. Overall smoking is a nuisance and it creates a lot of garbage and pollution.
To conclude, Smoking has many negative effects on health of both the parties smoking as well as non-smoking and it also is hazardous to the nature. In my opinion, the countries which ban smoking of cigarettes in public places are taking the right measure to prevent and protect public health and safety.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s for the smoker himself, if not worse. Hence in the spirit of good health and sensit...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...s on health of both the parties smoking as well as non-smoking and it also is hazardous to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9644012945 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70141838944 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4107181638 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257536007067 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987390091292 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421491997449 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173640396353 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427713319615 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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