In many countries, people are following new fashion and hairstyles
What are the reasons to influence it?
Is it a positive or negative development?
In a number of countries, people like to be updated according to new fashion and hairstyle trends. Advertisement and showing superiority are few of the reasons for this trend. I am of the opinion that following new styles bring more harm than good.
There are a number of factors which have made trend following popular. Firstly, the persuasive advertisement from brands. It is common to relate businesses with famous celebrities to attract customers for their products. People always try to imitate superstars so they can also possess the charisma and attraction exist in celebrities. It is often reported that people stand in lines to buy the specific outfit worn by a famous celebrity. Secondly, people show off their financial superiority by buying new fashion clothes and styling their hairs according to famous personalities. It is commonly considered as a status symbol because in this way rich people can make others see their enormous wealth and differentiate them from other lower classes.
However, an increase in latest fashion trends following has some serious problems. First of all, the increase in crime. People who cannot afford to follow this trend might do immoral activities to be able to buy it. People belong to the middle class or poor families may think that society will not accept them if are not updated with the new trends. Trend following has made a gap between these two classes which poor try to fill by illegal means. In addition, local cultures are losing their value. Adopting western culture by following new trends have made local values disappear. Every country has its own way of clothes and appearance which represents their culture but the latest trends are mostly opposite of the culture. For example, in many Arab countries, people use to wear the outfit called 'Kandoora' but nowadays they all follow the latest fashion and now it is difficult to spot an Arab in those countries.
In conclusion, it is clear that extensive advertisement and showing of status are some of the main influences to follow new trends. I believe it brings a lot of issues such as crimes and losing local culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01123595506 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6414055166 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556179775281 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4996392479 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9523809524 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248671479804 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665095031394 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621597006078 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156388518016 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543160509758 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.