In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
is this a positive or a negative development?
Recently, customers have started doing their shopping from malls and shopping centers which results in the closure of small shops found in local areas. I am of the opinion that this trend has brought more benefits than drawbacks.
There are a number of drawbacks to the increase in shopping centers. First of all, going to the mall is inconvenient for some people. Locals who buy only a small amount of things are more comfortable to buy it from shops which are close to their houses. For instance, going to the mall for a tea packet would be very expensive, considering the cost to reach the mall and the time it will consume. Secondly, closing small shops would bring unemployment. A lot of people who are not educated are employed by these local shops. They cannot even apply for jobs in malls because of their low education.
However, mall shopping has significant positive aspects to it. It brings customers under one roof. Centers designed for shopping includes every amenity of life which includes a huge range, starting from cars and all the way to a needle. This also helps in increasing sales as consumers might buy products which they were not originally intended to buy because of the availability. In addition, usually, malls have big traders who buy products in bulk and this results in cheaper prices. Malls are famous for discounted prices as compared to small shops which are beneficial for all kind of consumers. This is also because of the competition among traders to attract customers.
In conclusion, while closing shops in local areas would bring unease to people living around them and would also result in lose of jobs. I believe the trend of shopping from malls, far outweighs the minor disadvantages for it as the prices are way cheaper and gives customers wider access to all kind of products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86858974359 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53184638898 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4426055909 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32228308015 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10515709046 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08044290765 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218980131426 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729682912715 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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