In many countries, a prison sentence is considered as the best way to decrease crime. However, education is often argued as a more effective way.
Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
As we know, population is growing vary fast all over the world, same as crime rate is also increasing. The crime is more in especially in poor and developing countries. As per popular surveys, many reason behind this situation such as lack of education and poverty. Some people think that one way to decrease create is giving great punishment to culprits. However, some people think that best to stop crimes is giving proper education to people. It is difficult to support one, I agree to both views, because there are so many reasons I discuss in this assay.
First of all, education is a great power and it can change any kind of people lives. In other words, the education can enhance citizens thoughts, so they can choose right path to live. Moreover, education will show a lot of opportunities to make money, as a result crime rates will come down. For example, as per international media survey, so many offenders are illiterates and they don’t know what is illegal and what is legal. Hence, education solve this kind problem people get know about rules to how to live.
If come to other opinion, giving punishments is alo one of good idea to control crimes. In detail, some people commit offends intensionally, for them putting in prison is best option to teach lesson. Moreover, offenders will fear to do next crime. For instance, crime is very low in many counties, because they will give cruel punishments such as death penalty and life long jail.
To sum up, both views are correct for decrease crime from all kind of people. The education is best option to stop crime in illiterate people. Putting prison and cruel punishments, good way stop crimes in educated people. The level of punishments should vary depends on rate of crime and seriousness of crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81433224756 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54380502177 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1800739104 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7894736842 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272980156478 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849934554174 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547126627845 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167228660164 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785832266151 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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