In many countries, senior workers have higher salaries compared to those of young
workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree
or disagree?
It is really true, people are making more money who are all having more experience in all over the industries. Some people are thinking that young people can manage whatever works that experience candidates can do it. However, my opinion is knowledge comes from based on the experience.
On the other hand, The company directors board wants to complete their projects within their budget in order to this they will hire fewer experience candidates because of the recruiting resource for a fewer experience like it just a piece of cake. At the same time to hire an experienced candidate for a cost an arm and leg. Freshers can capable to handle the projects because of fresh knowledge and new innovations really help to manage the project. Also, they can think smartly to finish the task effortlessly.
On the one hand, people are generally preferring experienced candidates because if any critical work comes, then they can easily handle the situation without any fear. Firstly, very important that time-being, need to finish the project within the committed duration so that project will get success due to these people are hiring experienced candidates. Freshers cannot handle the situation straightforwardly for that experience only will guide us. Secondly, Experience candidate can play a vital role in Individual contributors. This role will help to reduce the number of resources from the projects and they can manage with single experience person. This really reduces the cost cut over where they can finish their project within the duration as well. It will fulfill entirely.
To recapitulate this, even though freshers can handle the situation differently but an experienced candidate only handle the critical situation and project durations. This two things which are really helping to manage the project work easily and reduce the project cost as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ffortlessly. On the one hand, people are generally preferring experienced candidates because if any c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72065964224 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7253719167 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698341536955 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270434865893 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339516123022 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549457960418 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366807222133 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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