In many countries, senior workers have higher salaries compared to those of young
workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree
or disagree?
In recent years salary comparison among employees is globally common. some people claim that in most of the countries the companies are paying higher salaries for the senior workers rather than the junior workers. this essay will argue that why seniors offered more salaries than the juniors by the employers.
employers can pay little attention with respect to salaries for the junior employees. because of the experience they obtained with respect to technology or the delivery they did on the project for the company's revenue. However they are at junior level they need to increase the levels up to the mark of the seniors in their own platform. Apart from the normal work they need to spend some time in building new to showcase them. For instance they will deliver the tasks alone without thinking out-of-box about the issues. The best practice the junior need to follow in order to compete with seniors is they need to work hard,understand and incorporate the technology they learned in their academics.
Despite of junior employees. The employers giving more salaries to the seniors employees is because they are the asset for the organisation and they worked hard,implemented/deployed lot of products at the market and helped in organisation growth financially and economically. For example during the company's bad phases they were back with them to bring it back. These kind of dedication will make the employers to pay higher salaries for their senior resources.
this essay argued that comparatively why senior employees are highly paid than juniors. In my opinion the employers will consider their long-term goals in order that they will retain their old and senior employees by paying more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82172402 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516245487365 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5672831165 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115462184678 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489173371476 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502461784974 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906103050645 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547126125433 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.