Nowadays, some employers pay extremely high amount of salaries to the top management with stock options and other benefits. This is the cause of concern to many others who think governments should put an upper limit on salaries so that everyone is equal. This essay will discuss both the views and suggest the writer’s opinion.
To begin with, the highly educated people who have invested in acquiring knowledge and education will always command higher pay scale like the scientists, engineers and medical experts. The value that they add to the organization is billions of dollars in revenues. So, they are paid equally well to keep them motivated to add more value. To exemplify, in a research held by Harvard University, it was confirmed that 90% of wealth of the world is controlled by 10% of the population of the world. Their contribution to the economy is the greatest and they help in generating employment, introducing cutting edge technology, constantly innovating and adding value to the growth of the country.
However, it is argued by many that the distribution of income and wealth should be optimum and the government should have a system to keep a control on the salaries. For example, in china, the government regulates everything including the salaries of individuals to maintain a balance in the country. Such balance sometimes is detrimental to the growth of the country, as there will be no competition and motivation to break a new ground each day.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that, many countries pay exorbitant salaries to a few employees, to which some people dispute and urge the government to regulate the salaries of individuals in the country. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the idea of government’s intervention as it might be detrimental to the growth of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
... a balance in the country. Such balance sometimes is detrimental to the growth of the countr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0761589404 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00481500355 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1398067581 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24262012763 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749988722614 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625149013908 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146463661727 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759534670457 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.