In many countries, sports stars earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that sports stars earn too much money, while others claim that they deserve their high salaries.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is commonly believed that sports is a mode of entertainment and athletes get highly paid whereas other professions are important than sports and should be given high wages. To be very precise, the criticality of work constitute of different elements that should define the pay scale but country’s reputation cannot be ignored. This essay will shed light on both these views.
First of all, it has been observed that that lot of practice and devotion is required to become sportsman. With the sportsmanship the attribute of sacrificing their family life is a major factor. Among all, it is a known fact that life span of this profession is less in comparison with other work. Therefore, government reward the players with more salary. For example, a well-known cricketer Sachin Tendulkar retired at the age of 37 and contributed a lot in the nation’s victory in sports. Thus, countries love to feed the players with high incentives.
Most importantly, it has been noticed that capping the salaries is not the solution for equality in every work. Moreover, the government should be impartial and make sure that the work involves more risk requires more wages. Although doctor’s saves the life of other people, income is really less. For example, a recent situation of pandemic due to covid19 has proved that the life of medical staff is at high risk instead sportsman. That is why, it is important to give more money to those who work hard to save the mankind.
In my opinion, country always want to showcase the high image whether in terms of sports or other profession but priority of high salaries should be given to profession involving life threating risk.
To conclude, I would rather say, representation of country is not an easy task as it involves a lot of pressure that is why the salaries are high. Besides, other profession like doctors and engineers should not be left behind when it comes to pay handsome amount of salaries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7100398311 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6687181588 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17622308882 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519883971284 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605665038206 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1095518593 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550367537217 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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