You are applying for a job in an international company. You would like to ask your previous employer to write a reference letter for you. Write a letter to your previous manager. In your letter
• remind your manager of the job you previously held in the company
• tell him / her what position you are applying for and why you want it
• ask him / her to provide you with a reference letter
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing to seek a letter of reference, as I am applying for senior Hr executive in organization called American express.
With regards to my profile, I am Urvashi saxena one of the HR intern in your team and have worked with you from July 2019-July 2021. Besides, HR internship I was also trained on different operations parameters.
Please allow me to explain you the importance of this post. As, I am getting the opportunity to work as senior Hr executive with the esteemed company. Also, they are offering me good salary package. Not only the take home salary will be good but also I will get the chance to get pragmatic knowledge. This company will also provide medical benefits for parents.
I would like to request you to help me with the reference letter where you can vouch for my character and perseverance. More importantly, your reference towards my attitude and aptitude to learn will have a salutary effect on my application. Additionally, it would be great if you could mention few lines about my character and professional aspects.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing to seek a letter of re...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...xplain you the importance of this post. As, I am getting the opportunity to work a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99481865285 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86231798338 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3177952046 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1538461538 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247902095026 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830909497519 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738650860665 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123980549785 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594932106893 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.