You are applying for a job in an international company. You would like to ask your previous employer to write a reference letter for you. Write a letter to your previous manager. In your letter
• remind your manager of the job you previously held in the company
• tell him / her what position you are applying for and why you want it
• ask him / her to provide you with a reference letter
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to seek a letter of reference as I am applying for senior Hr executive in organization called American express.
With regards to my profile, I am Urvashi saxena one of the HR intern in your team and have worked with you from July 2019-July 2021. Besides, HR internship I was also trained on different operations parameters.
Please allow me to explain you the importance of this post. As, I am getting the opportunity to work as senior Hr executive with the esteemed company. Also, they are offering me good salary package. Not only the take home salary will be good but also I will get the chance to get pragmatic knowledgeThis company will also provide medical benefits for parents.
As for my reference letter, I would like to request you to vouch for my character and perseverance in the letter. More importantly, your reference towards my attitude and aptitude to learn will have a salutary effect on my application. Additionally, it would be great if you could mention few lines about my character and professional aspects.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.984375 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88911371905 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6222263006 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258306063704 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090676538591 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792763445524 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127974695626 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598958255032 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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